That Was Better (23,510)

I didn't start writing as early as I should have. When do I not? But with a better night's sleep and a decision to move on (or actually back a little) and write a more important, bigger scene, this morning's session was much more enjoyable. I still want to at least catch up to the 50K pace, so I'm planning on another 1500 words tonight. We'll see.

This scene lets us see that there really is something going on involving something not of this earth and puts Fred in the middle of it by meeting the lady and the scientist.